Angel of Death

Hey Ky! Thanks for the heads up. Really, I don't see anything to nit-pick about. I'm really thirsting to find out what is going on here but I guess I'll ...

Hey Sunny! I really liked this. Especially the opening line. The title caught my attention, especially since we're getting ready to read Romeo and Juliet in my English class. You ...

Hey KJ!! Thanks for the PM! And yes, I think you should continue this. Autumn is a great character and I am really curious to see where this is all ...

Hey there Dallas! Haven't seen you around these parts, so you must be new. I'm Angel of Death but everyone just calls me Angel. Welcome to YWS!! I hope you're ...

This part was written well, and though it was uneventful, I haven't lost interest. I've learn to trust you when you have these filler chapters, so I know where you're ...

Hey Ash! I was so excited to read this! Awe, but it's too bad I was the last to get here because everyone found all of the nit-picks. Well, I'll ...

Here again! Gosh, this really had my heart racing at the speed of light! I couldn't stop reading and I'm not sure if I saw any mistakes or not because ...

Hey there Ky! I said I was going give a critique, well possibly several since you have about three of these posted, but here I am! The heat blistered the ...

Ello Connie! Well, I kinda have to agree with Jared. This is a bit rushed, though it was written beautifully and your characters are well-developed and altogether this was entertaining ...

Hey there Connie! So, I quite liked this, no wait, I loved it! It was a really, brilliant idea and I liked all of the twist and turns there was ...

Hey there Samuel! Well, when I was in Middle School, American History was one of my favorite classes even though the history books weren't really exciting to read about. This ...

Hey Ash! Ooh I'm so excited to read this! After the guests of Everlancor finished their meals, the Baron insisted that the male delegation join him for a smoke in ...

Hey KJ!! I agree with the above reviewer, this was really good and you're developing Autumn really well. I like the fact that Thor seems all mysterious in the beginning ...

Hey KJ!! Wow, it seems like a while since I've read anything from you. And as always, this was a very good read and I think it's a very good ...

Hey Shina! As a whole I liked this. There was only one thing I can nit-pick about but really it's just a suggestion. So harsh you seem, So cold you ...